
Nests

The story was slow going and lacked the action needed to keep the reader's attention. I could have easily skipped a chapter or two and picked right back up on what was happening. The creature and descriptions were vague; "I hear something. It had a circular shape. I think it's part of something much bigger. I hear a sound from somewhere." That was quite annoying. I was thinking, "WHAT?! What do you see, feel, hear?" There was also a lot of crying and weeping for these dehydrated people. I guess I'd do that too if I felt I was gonna die any minute.
It wasn't awful, but it wasn't good either.