Bloodrush

Bloodrush - Bryan Smith Kobo~
1 Star
I totally disliked this unrealistic book and am disappointed that the author did not, I'm assuming, write to the best of his ability. If someone handed me this book and told me it was from an anonymous author, I would have given it 2 stars for a first time author.
From the first page you get self indulgent writing.
David is a guy who is out shopping for a ring for his girlfriend Janine. "His gaze drifted to the white price tag beside it. Written in blue ink was a figure so astronomical it seemed impossible, the stuff of science fiction." The writing just doesn't fit. He then feels someone following him, a girl. He approaches her and from there he becomes this total idiot/slave. Narcis goes from being a girl in his thoughts to a woman when he kisses her, then back to a girl when he's not thinking of her sexually.
Again, the writing is not good. You are mine, she says. Yes, I am, he says.
Not Good~ I want my money back :(