The Hot Floor
Can you love me,like you love him?
Can you touch me there,
while he sits and stares?
Can you lick me here,
while he does me bare?
Can you tease me, please me,
without a care?
Can you?
Can we?
Can it just be...
Us three?
by Nikki
I had high hopes, but the more I read, the more incredulous the story became. Rai was overly touchy and made me uncomfortable just reading the story. Ev was alright, but I really didn't care for Josh. He was too needy and not in a sexy submissive way. The desperation put a damper on the love triangle. It was just alright. Too many unspoken words and not enough background. Just an alright read.
