Out of Focus
Not what I expected. The first 70 pages were really slow-going. Witt's prose usually grabs me even if the subject matter is not to my liking. I have one question; What the hell was Eli in the story for? He was filler. The 2 Doms theme didn't work for me and I never felt where the "I love you's" came from. I felt like it was a different writer. Not for me~
